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Writing Blog Post

Swimming After School DUN,DUN,DAAAAAAH After a boring day at school I go to my swimming lessons at Pioneer Pool. I swipe my card and slide through to the changing rooms. Once I’m in my togs I have a quick play in the large warm pool for about 10 minutes and then it is my swimming lessons. I slowly climb into the freezing cold pool and… I quickly slid under the water to scream as loud as I could. It was so freezing I almost fainted, but I didn’t. All my friends just jumped in like it was a spa pool. I don’t know why they weren’t ice cubes, cause I was . Anyway, once I got used to the water I was fine, having fun with my friends. But I will always get cold at swimming lessons...

By Zara Munro :)

About to hatch

Moment in Time Writing Term 2 2017
WALT write "a moment in time" writing. Specific goals (Please highlight yours) I can support my ideas with detail  (Ideas) I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic  (Vocabulary) I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure & Language)
About to Hatch (Add 3 sentences for each sense) I can see: I can see small cracks start to get bigger and bigger. I can see multicolores through the cracks. I can see the water start to creep closer and closer.

I can hear: Squeaky voices as if they are from an animal. As I walk past I hear spitting noises. I hear someone calling out to me. I can smell: