Term 1 2014 Written Language

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WALT write a timed recount about a time when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
·      when and where you did something special
·      who was with you
·      what you did (think about the order you did things)
·      how you felt and why you felt this way.

By Zara Munro

When I was five, my fun Grandma and my funny Grandad, my annoying sister and I went to Willowbank. We couldn’t even see the keas but we could hear them. There were baby otters, there were orang-utans, parrots, lots of cool things. We had a lot of fun because the keas sounded nice and the orang-utans were really, really funny. The baby otters were really cute. I hoped they had a great time because I did.

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